I really REALLY love these! It's amazing to see your progression! I adore how minimalistic and clean these are - they're very sleek and stylish, yet communicate your ideas clearly. Great meeting of form and function. The middle one is beautiful, but I think for a poster, I prefer the elegant simplicity of the first and third ones.
And I think the third one is my absolute favorite. :) The composition is so considered and balanced without being boring, and your choice of fonts match perfectly.
The plant is so cute, btw. :)
The only thing that distracted me from the third one, and this might just be due to the size, is that in the sun, I read the "a" as a pair of quotation marks. If other people see that as well, maybe just make the "a" a couple sizes larger.
Great work! Thanks for posting all your progress! :D
Thanks Liz! I find these comments to be very helpful in navigating my next steps on what works and doesn't work. The third one is my favorite too. I thought the "a" didn't look right, but wasn't sure. I appreciate the feedback. :-)
I like these a lot too, though I admit my vote is for the middle one. I just think the subtle glow of the sun matches nicely with the glow of the seed sprout.
I really REALLY love these! It's amazing to see your progression! I adore how minimalistic and clean these are - they're very sleek and stylish, yet communicate your ideas clearly. Great meeting of form and function. The middle one is beautiful, but I think for a poster, I prefer the elegant simplicity of the first and third ones.
ReplyDeleteAnd I think the third one is my absolute favorite. :) The composition is so considered and balanced without being boring, and your choice of fonts match perfectly.
The plant is so cute, btw. :)
The only thing that distracted me from the third one, and this might just be due to the size, is that in the sun, I read the "a" as a pair of quotation marks. If other people see that as well, maybe just make the "a" a couple sizes larger.
Great work! Thanks for posting all your progress! :D
Thanks Liz! I find these comments to be very helpful in navigating my next steps on what works and doesn't work. The third one is my favorite too. I thought the "a" didn't look right, but wasn't sure. I appreciate the feedback. :-)
ReplyDeleteI like these a lot too, though I admit my vote is for the middle one. I just think the subtle glow of the sun matches nicely with the glow of the seed sprout.
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